No. Definitely NOT.
But if you come back this coming Friday, I can reveal to you the absolutely stunning cover for Sophie’s Run!
See you then? 🙂
See you then? 🙂
This little word puts the fear of God in a lot of writers. #amediting is an oft-seen hashtag frequently accompanied by wailing and proverbial gnashing of teeth. Many authors, me included, confess to a certain amount of dread when it comes to editing.
I wonder why. Because when it comes to it, I perversely enjoy it. Ignore the initial pain and frustration; once I knuckle down, I find the process quite exhilarating and ultimately rewarding.
My work process involves two broad types of editing. ‘Me’ editing, aka the author edit. And publisher editing, aka… well, publisher editing. Right now, for my second novel, I am working through stage one, ‘me’ editing.
Having let the manuscript rest for a good few months, I have taken another good, fresh look at it and got the red pen out. Why? Well, for one, I had to. I know Sophie’s Run is at least twenty-five thousand words too wordy for commercial publication, so they had to go. And second, because I wanted to. I felt the need. With a bit of distance, I wanted to go through my work and make sure that it still zings for me. There are certain things I learned from the publisher edits of Sophie’s Turn that I wanted to apply rightaway. I’ll talk about that some other time.
Today, I want to talk about this weird split personality that I have discovered. There’s me, and there’s The Other. My Inner Editor. She of the Ruthless Cutting Mindset. The Queen of Hearts.
So, the cutting. The bloodlet. That’s the part I dread and fear most. And yet surprisingly, it’s turning out to be quite easy. I appear to have grown a second head, one that is dispassionate and detached and ruthless. An Inner Editor has quite unexpectedly and without invitation taken residence in this new, second head of mine that isn’t even attached to my normal pair of shoulders. I kid you not—that’s exactly what it feels like!
I might be reading along merrily, quite enjoying myself, when my Inner Editor pipes up, quite brusquely—not to say, rudely—and instructs me to cut, cut, cut. “Can’t you see,” she’ll tell me in no uncertain terms, “that while this scene is fun, it’s also just excess fat? It doesn’t advance the plot, it’s not necessary. Take it out. Use it some other time.” Honestly, she really is like the Queen of Hearts, all Off With His Head (or rather, Out With The Scene!). Thus out come the scissors, and my office floor swiftly resembles a cutting room floor.
She’s usually right. It’s not that what I was written was bad, or wrong. On the contrary, I am quite often deeply attached to the scene in question. But if it’s not essential, then it has to go. If I can transplant the joke somewhere else, I will. If I can tell it in fewer words, I shall. And the end result: a pacy, fast, page-turning read (if I say so myself) that is better than it was before.
How much has she made me cut? I don’t know yet. I was going to start putting these edits into my manuscript in Word but owing to a small computer crisis, I’ve had a small delay. I can tell you, though, that I have cut at least four chapters; that there isn’t a page without at least five lines crossed out; and that a lot of excess verbiage has been clipped. I’m not entirely sure whether I’ve culled the required 25K but I don’t think I’m far off. And there are a few scenes that I have point-blank refused to take out (yet) even though Inner Editor was spitting with fury at my ignoring of her very relevant suggestions. These are my back up, my cushion, my fall back. With those, I will scrape over the all important finish.
I’m zinging with zest. I have this tingling in my toes that tells me I’m on to a good thing. The book feels sumptuous yet lean, luxurious and fast. Thank you, Inner Editor, and please forgive all the abuse I hurled at you. I love you, really.
Of course, this isn’t it. When I’m done, Sophie’s Run goes back to Sapphire Star again; my lovely publisher, has, of course, already read my second masterpiece, but now it’s time for the full-on, no holds-barred, all-out publisher edits.
How do you approach editing? Do you have your very own Queen of Hearts sitting on your shoulder?
Did you know I can’t juggle? Not at all. I’m hopeless with balls in the air. I have no spacial vision whatsoever and any kind of ball games involve me scrabbling around ungracefully, feeling foolish.
But write and promote a Trilogy within a contracted timeframe with a publisher while also performing my day job as a mum? Yeah, bring it on! Right at this moment, I am juggling. I’m juggling promotion, editing, planning and writing, and I’m having a ball.
You all know my first book, Sophie’s Turn, is now out and available to buy. It’s been getting fabulous reviews in my 67-strong blog tour, and I’m doing interviews, guest posts, give-aways by the dozens. I’ve also had the local paper round to do a lovely little feature, and I’m hosting a ‘meet the author’ event at my local library in October. In addition, I’m planning to contact local book clubs, independent book stores, the WI, radio stations… you name it, I’m on a roll. I live on Twitter and Facebook as the great promotional rollercoaster goes through loop after looop. Rock on!
My second focus at this time is Sophie’s Run. It is completely written but at just over 149,ooo words for the first draft (yes, you read that right) it is slightly too long. I am going through page by page, scene by scene, chapter by chapter, looking for excess fat, unnecessary detours and undue verbiage in my quest to eliminate around 30,000 words from the first draft. God, that sounds a lot, right? But it will be done. I have about four weeks to get the slimline version to my lovely publishers over at Sapphire Star.
Moreover, the cover is being designed right at this time and it is going to be absolutely stunning. I don’t know when the cover reveal will take place, but rest assured, I will shout about it!
What happens in Sophie’s Run? Here’s a little taster…
Her famous star remains her rock while life takes her on a little detour…
Who says that the road toward true love is straight and even? Sophie is certainly discovering that it is anything but.
So she has finally found the man of her dreams. Well…she knows who he is, even though she hasn’t actually quite met him yet. When she misses her opportunity, her life goes crazy. Rock star and ex-fiancé, Dan, keeps getting in the way of her new romance—even if he is just trying to be helpful. A fire, an impromptu mini-trip with Dan, and a dreaded wedding later, Sophie is still struggling to meet the love of her life. Just as she is getting it together with her perfect man, best friend Rachel commits an act of unspeakable betrayal. And to top it all, her new boyfriend leaves her lying in the mud.
Sophie has had enough. Confused and distraught, she decides that it is time for radical change. Surprising herself and shocking her friends, she embarks on a secret that eventually gets her life back on track.
If you’ve enjoyed Sophie’s Turn, you’ll be in for a real treat, if I say so myself with all due humility. Sophie’s Run is due for release by Sapphire Star Publishing on 7 February 2013.
So then… what about the last part in the Trilogy? Well, my friends, this is all planned out and I will be writing it just as soon as I’ve sent Sophie’s Run back to Sapphire Star for proper publisher editing.
The working title is Sophie’s Encore and this book is due for release by Sapphire Star Publishing on 7 September 2013!! It’s too early to give you a teaser for this last part, but it will end the story with due style and panache. I promise you, you won’t be disappointed!
Indeed, it’s party time again! Did you guess right yesterday?
I feel like a regular party girl these days. Break out the bubbly, have a little treat and join the party! Oh, and know that while the celebrations continue, I’ll be planning the third part of the Rock Star Romance Trilogy… just how will the story end??XX
Happy Wednesday! Just a quick message to let you know that I am visiting the lovely Carol on her book blog today to talk about the sequel to Sophie’s Turn as part of the “W.I.P. Wednesday” series. Pop on over and visit HERE to get the scoop…
Good afternoon! I just thought that perhaps I owed it to you all to let you know what I’ve been up to… having been a little quiet lately. As you may have read in a previous post, I have finished the first draft for the sequel to “Sophie’s Turn.” Now, I’m in the ‘manuscript resting’ phase. This means that the pile of paper pictured below is currently busily being ignored while my mind takes a break from the plot and the characters. In this manner, when I return to the manuscript for editing in a couple of weeks’ time, I’ll have a fresh outlook on it and I will find it much easier to spot holes, inconsistencies, fine-tune the humour, dial out the comedy moments and generally do everything else that authors do to make a good book truly great.
In the meantime, I thought I might get some rest, too. Not so! Here’s what I’ve been up to:
**Thinking about marketing and promotion
**Dreaming up the cover
**Dealing with half-term….
**Travelling to London to visit the US embassy for an ITIN (long story)
**Organising a birthday party for my five year-old
**Blogging, guest blogging, facebooking and tweeting
And somehow, days go by before I can say, “Sophie’s Run.” And yes… here’s a little snippet of info to whet your appetite. At this time, I am reasonably confident that the sequel will be titled “Sophie’s Run.” Why? Well, watch this space… I’ll be guest blogging at a really hot blog very soon about the sequel!
With that, I shall allow myself one, or maybe two, more weeks of maturing time for the manuscript. So long my friends, and stay tuned!
I certainly did, hooray! For weeks now, I have been posting word counts and little updates here and there regarding my progress on “The Sequel” for my debut novel, Sophie’s Turn. It is with huge, enormous and almost indescribable excitement that I can announce that I have completed a first draft.
And yes, I really am totally chuffed about it! Ecstatic, overwhelmed, and ludicrously proud. I had the best time writing it and it was wonderful to see Sophie’s life develop and move on.
Tell me more…!
At this time, my second master piece is just over 149,000 words long. That would translate into something like 400 pages in paperback. Somebody has already told me that this very exciting: a real ‘doorstop read’ like we used to enjoy in the ’80s and ’90s. Personally, I am very partial to a long, fantastic read that really involves you and captivates you, and that’s why I have written another one. (Weighing in at just over 135,000 words, Sophie’s Turn would be about 380 pages long.)
What about the title? Why aren’t you telling us the title?
Ah, well, now that is a good question. I do have a title for the sequel. In fact, I am currently using the third iteration of a working title! But I am not convinced that I have found the killer title yet. This, too, will reveal itself to me… probably in the middle of the night some time soon! For now, I am not in a particular hurry to pin down the definite title.
Why is that, you want to know? There’s quite a simple reason. Sophie’s Turn was born under a different title, and one that I thought was perfect and adhered to for six years. It was only on the eve of publication–quite literally–that I suddenly realised that the title was somewhat… obscure! And thus I fell out of love with it. So I have learnt my lesson and am leaving the title for my next novel fluid and in the air until the last minute… which is to say, until I am finalising cover design with the help of the lovely Jessie Dalrymple.
Ok, but what is “The Sequel” all about?
This novel is Part 2 in the Rock Star Romance trilogy and it continues the story of Sophie, Dan and Rachel, also introducing a couple of important new characters.
The sequel features high drama, comedy moments and two weddings–but whose, and to whom? If you’ve read Sophie’s Turn, you’ll naturally expect a certain course of events… but life never goes to plan!
Part 2 begins with Sophie’s long over-due thunderbolt-and-lightning moment. However, just a few short days later, a disastrous ending to her birthday party sees her moving in with none other than the delectable Dan Hunter. On a strictly platonic basis, of course, and for a limited time only. Nonetheless, her stay at Dan’s house sets in motion a series of events that derails everything she had expected to happen.
Best friend Rachel has a much bigger and more important role to play in this chapter of Sophie’s life; but this is not a part that she particularly enjoys. It also gets her into a lot of trouble. And Sophie… well, she reaches the point of no return; she’s just about had enough, and she draws the consequences.
When will you publish your next novel?
I am aiming to publish Part 2 in July of this year. Here’s my plan of action. For the next month or so, I won’t be touching the book at all. Won’t read it, work on it, or consider it in any detail. I will, however, be busy working on ‘blurbs’ and synopses, as well as the cover, so that I can bring you more juicy information some time in March.
Throughout March, I will be re-reading my work, editing, tweaking, polishing, improving, deleting scenes, adding new ones, plugging holes, streamlining twists (or making them sharper!)… whatever is necessary. A small group of ‘test readers’ will offer feedback that I will duly incorporate, as well!
In April, I will once more take a break from the novel but May will see the last serious edits and also several rounds of in-house and external proofing. So watch this space… some time in June, I hope to post a taster chapter right here on this blog!
Wow, that’s a long drawn-out process!
It certainly is! A great novel is like a good wine. It needs a lot of maturing! 🙂
I haven’t read Sophie’s Turn yet. Can you tell me what your debut novel is all about?
Rock Star Romance Sophie’s Turn is the funny, honest and occasionally bitter-sweet story of one young woman’s entanglement with a rock star.
One fine day in Paris, Sophie Penhalligan suddenly finds herself engaged to her teenage crush and love-of-her-life-from-a-distance, rock singer and star extraordinaire Dan Hunter. But there is the small matter of her very recent, but very prior, engagement to Tim. Reliable, honest, trusting Tim, her boyfriend of two years stashed away safely in his mews house in South Kensington while Sophie is drinking rather too much champagne with Dan in Paris. The novel describes how Sophie gets into this impossible situation and how she turns it around. Follow Sophie on a roller-coaster of events including an ill-fated trip to Paris with Tim, a night of unfulfilled romance with Dan, Sophie and Tim’s engagement party gate-crashed by Dan, and Sophie’s professional secondment to accompany Dan’s band on their revival tour—at Dan’s special request and very much against her will…
You can download Sophie’s Turn onto your Kindle right here.
Amazing! Thanks for the update!
My pleasure! Keep watching this space as I will certainly keep you all posted. Also, get in touch if you have any questions or thoughts or any kind of reaction at all. I’d love to hear from you!