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CentreStage: Gilli Allan launches “Life Class”

Welcome to a new edition of CentreStage! Today I have a very special guest–the one and only Gilli Allan.  Gilli is publishing her fourth (!) novel today, and hers is a journey towards publication full of twists and turns, knocks and setbacks, and new beginnings.  Find out about Gilli’s brand of determination, persistence and good cheer… Give it up for the lovely…. Gilli Allan!

Gilli, congratulations on launch day! You must be really proud.  It’s a pleasure to have you on CentreStage today. Why don’t you start by telling us a little bit about your publishing journey?

Hi Nicky,  thank you for hosting me on your blog. I may be here to publicise my new book, LIFE CLASS, but first I want to tell you a bit about myself and share a common experience I, and other writers, have to contend with….

When I meet new people I am often faced with the comment: ‘Ooh, I’ve always meant to write a book one day … when I’ve got the time.’

Fair enough. Good for you, I think. It’s a remark which is almost impossible to respond to because it carries several implications. Perhaps I’m too sensitive, but the headline meaning seems to be: Writing is easy and anyone can do it. Well, yes. Most people can write, in the sense of putting words down on a page and stringing them together into sentences. The second inference might be that writers are lazy, self-indulgent types, who don’t have enough real work to occupy them.  All they do is drape themselves on sofas all day, eating chocolates and daydreaming. If only!

Oh Gilli, I am so with you! Someone asked me recently what I do when the boys are at school.  I said, “why, I write.  Books, you know?” And the person looked at me and persisted, “yes, but what do you really do?”  Go figure. Shrug it off, move on. Some folks won’t get it.
🙂  But I digress.  You were saying…?

I didn’t start writing seriously, by which I mean writing a complete novel with the intention of getting it published, until I was married and at home with my three-year old son. Had I known the amount of work involved, even I would perhaps have thought twice before starting the project. My novel was written long-hand and extensively edited and corrected–line after line scored through, with arrows to revised inserts written above the original or up the margin. Where it all became too confusing, I cut out and stuck passages of rewritten text over the old. When I’d finished the first draft I bought a reconditioned, sit-up-and-beg Olivetti typewriter. The typing was slow and error-strewn because I am not a typist and because this process was the book’s second edit. The finished pages were still marred by crossings out and crusty with tippex. So I typed it up and edited it yet again. It took ten months to get to a draft I was happy to show the world.

Impressive process. I love your style–real paper-based work, a labour of love and persistence. Hats off to you!

My first completed book, Just Before Dawn, almost immediately found a newly established publisher. Called Love Stories, it was aiming to provide intelligent, unconventional, un-clichéd stories about love and relationships. My writing fitted this remit perfectly.  Sadly, after publishing my second novel, Desires & Dreams, Love Stories folded.  The publisher was unable to get the promotion, marketing and distribution to gain success for itself or its authors.

What a stroke of bad luck for you! Where do you go from here, Gilli?

I reckon most of us writers openly or perhaps secretly covet a mainstream publishing deal. After all, publication is validation of the creative impulse which made you give a year or more of your life to it. You want people to read what you’ve written. You want to feel you haven’t been wasting your time. But for the majority of us, there is no easy road to this goal. You are more likely to get a publishing deal if you’re already famous and, preferably, young and beautiful. The walls you need to climb to get a mainstream publishing deal grow higher and harder all the time. I know. I’ve beaten my head against them ever since the demise of my first publisher.

Even the e-revolution, which looked like the answer to all our dreams, has the capacity to bite back. If you self-publish, it’s very hard to gain the profile necessary for healthy sales if you’re not a ‘name’ or if your book doesn’t fit a sub-genre, easy to categorise and market. So, having self-published my book, TORN, in April, 2011, I was delighted to find an e-publisher by late that summer, who wanted to take on my next book, LIFE CLASS. I signed a contract in the autumn, but by January this year they told me they’d stopped trading. This is why I self-published LIFE CLASS.

What an odyssey! I admire your persistence and your resilience… hang on, what’s that you’re saying?

Exactly.  Resilience. To become a published writer you need resilience. You need to be tenacious, obstinate, persistent and obsessive. In other words, bloody-minded. You need to be like a ‘wobbly man’ ̶ one of those figures with a heavy rounded base. Though they do fall over if punched, they don’t stay down. They swing around and bob back up again. Wish me luck.

Good luck, Gilli!  Your hard work will pay off, and you are already un-put-downable… as are your books.  Let’s take a look at LIFE CLASS!

LIFE CLASS
A story about art, life, love and learning lessons

The class meets once a week to draw the human figure. For four of its members, life hasn’t lived up to expectations. All have failed to achieve what they thought they wanted in life. They gradually come to realise that it’s not just the naked model they need to study and understand. Their stories are very different, but they all have secrets they hide from the world and from themselves. By uncovering and coming to terms with the past, maybe they can move on to a different and unimagined future.

Dory says she works in the sex trade, the clean-up end. She deals with the damage sex can cause. Her job has given her a jaundiced view of men, an attitude confirmed by the disintegration of her own relationship. The time seems right to pursue what she really wants in life, if she can work out what that is. Love doesn’t figure in her view of the future – she’s always been a clear-eyed realist – yet she finds herself chasing a dream.

Stefan is a single-minded loner, whose sole and overriding ambition is to make a living from his sculpture. So how the hell did he find himself facing a class of adults who want their old teacher back? Although love is an emotion he long ago closed off – it only leads to regret and shame – it creeps up on him from more than one direction. Is it time to admit that letting others into his life is not defeat?

Fran – Dory’s older sister – is a wife and a stay-at-home mother without enough to keep her occupied. On a collision course with her mid-life crisis, Fran craves the romance and excitement of her youth. An on-line flirtation with an old boyfriend becomes scarily obsessive, putting everything she really loves at risk.

Dominic – has lived his life knowing all about sex but nothing about love. If he can only find his mother perhaps he can make sense of his past. But perhaps it is a doomed quest and it’s time to look to the future? By accepting the help and love that’s on offer here and now, he has a chance to transform his life.

LIFE CLASS is available in Kindle edition from Amazon NOW!  But there’s more!  Look at what Gilli has to offer to celebrate the launch of LIFE CLASS:

Yes, Nicky, there is more!  To coincide with the launch of Life Class, and for a fortnight only from MAY 1, I am discounting the price of TORN to an astounding 77p!

TORN
You can escape your past but can you ever escape yourself?

TORN is a contemporary story, which faces up to the complexities, messiness and absurdities in modern relationships.  Life is not a fairy tale; it can be confusing and difficult. Sex is not always awesome; it can be awkward and embarrassing, and it has consequences. You don’t always fall for Mr Right, even if he falls for you. And realising you’re in love is not always good news. It can make the future look daunting……

Jess has made a series of bad choices.  Job, relationships and life-style have all let her down. But by escaping the turmoil of her London life, she is putting her young child first. This time she wants to get it right, to devote herself to being a mother.  In the country she will find peace, simplicity and the good life, won’t she?

But a beautiful environment does not guarantee a tranquil life.  There are stresses and strains here too – the landscape she looks out on is under threat, new friends have hidden agendas, two very different men pull her in opposing directions – and in the face of temptation old habits die hard. Despite her resolution to avoid entanglements, she is torn between the suitable man and the unsuitable boy.

TORN, Special 77p offer, for a fortnight only to celebrate the launch of Gilli Allan’s latest book, LIFE CLASS.

Thanks so much, Gilli, for this amazing offer and for visiting CentreStage on your launch day. Many congratulations, and best of luck! Now there’s only one thing I’d like to know:  where can we find out more about you and your books?

Well, Nicky, I am all over the Internet! Visit me on the Gilli Allan blog, on Famous Five Plus, or on the  British Romance Fiction blog. You can find me on Facebook or follow me on Twitter, and I am also a Goodreads author!

Fantastic! You rock! Come back some time and tell us how it’s going… 🙂

Sophie has an exciting confession for Dan…

Indeed, it’s party time again!  Did you guess right yesterday?

I feel like a regular party girl these days. Break out the bubbly, have a little treat and join the party!  Oh, and know that while the celebrations continue, I’ll be planning the third part of the Rock Star Romance Trilogy… just how will the story end??XX

~Nicky 🙂

A Working Holiday for Sophie’s Turn

Now officially a Romantic Novelist!

Another cause for celebration here on my Rock Star Romance blog!  I have joined the Romantic Novelists’ Association, whoooop whooop!

Having followed many an RNA author and NWS author on Twitter and FB for some time; having perused the RNA website and blog; having heard all about their fabulous group of authors, the support they give each other, their amazing conferences, Christmas parties and other functions, it is with considerable excitement that I now find myself part of this association. I really look forward to meeting fellow authors and taking part in as many events as I can possibly manage.

About the Romantic Novelists’ Association

The Romantic Novelists’ Association (RNA) was formed in 1960 to promote romantic fiction and to encourage writing, and now represents more than 700 writers, agents, editors and other publishing professionals. Following a hugely successful golden anniversary in 2010, the RNA have been working on a new brand identity to reflect their vision as an organisation.  If you want to find out more about the Romantic Novelists’ Association, visit their website or their blog.  Sometime soon, there might be my very own author page there, too.  And now I will go and celebrate being a Romantic Novelist!
Cheers and rock on!

CentreStage on Nicky’s Blog: Bonnie Trachtenberg

Welcome to the second edition of CentreStage!

CentreStage is a new feature on my blog that will showcase fantastic authors from around the world, introducing in particular my fellow authors in the Sapphire Star Publishing family, as well as fellow featured authors at loveahappyending.com.  In this new, exciting feature, these authors might write for you about their lives, or their writing journey, or anything else that matters to them.  Every feature will be different in format and flavour, so watch out for a variety of stories and tales.

Today, it is my tremendous pleasure to welcome loveahappyending.com featured author, Bonnie Trachtenberg!  Bonnie writes romantic comedy, and today she talks about her spiritual side… and how that features in her amazing novels!

Bonnie Trachtenberg writes:  “When the Spirit Grabbed Me”

There are no accidents—or so I’ve come to believe on my journey through life. That fact takes a bit of the sting out of some life’s more difficult events. If you believe there is a reason for everything, you spend less time fretting and feeling sorry for yourself, and more time figuring out exactly what it is you are supposed to be learning from the experience. Life is a school, after all, and don’t we all want to graduate with honors?

That is merely one of the pearls I’ve collected on my ongoing search for ultimate wisdom. This odyssey began in my childhood, with distinct memories of places I’d never visited and people I didn’t know. As I had an active imagination, I chalked them up to dreams, but something in me always knew there was more to life than what I could perceive with my five senses. I often felt a loving, otherworldly, presence around me, though nobody in my family ever made mention of such things.

I will never forget the day when, as an adolescent, I caught a glimpse of myself in the bathroom mirror, and, for just a few moments, felt separate from that young girl. It was the first time I became consciously aware that my spirit was a separate entity from my body—that this was just one of my “outfits” and there had been many others. Needless to say it was a pretty mind-blowing experience for a preteen!

Around that time, I began reading anything and everything I could find on every spiritual topic from reincarnation to out-of-body experiences, ghosts to psychic phenomena, energy healing to synchronicity and beyond. My preferred game was the Ouija board, which I’ve since come to learn was a fairly dangerous “toy” to being playing with unprotected. Since then, my enthrallment with the spiritual world has never wavered.

As an adult, one of my favorite places to be is in a spiritual book store. I’ve spent many blissful hours there, oftentimes with my best friend, Cathy (a kindred spirit for sure). For the last decade or so, my greatest concentration of study has been the afterlife. I know the reason for this is not based in fear of my own death, as I firmly believe we go to a much better place, but rather, in fear of the death of my loved ones. I dread being left in this often-harsh realm without the people I love most. One-way conversations seem like quite a lonely prospect and I’ve prayed for the ability to see and hear those who have passed.

I’ve visited gifted mediums in search of proof. Interestingly (and unprovoked) several have told me I possess the gift of healing and should be using it. (I did become a Reiki master last year and occasionally use my hands to help myself, my animals and my husband when he lets me.) I have, on several occasions, exhibited precognitive abilities (dreaming things before they come true). I enlisted in psychic development classes and realized, to my amazement, my capabilities far exceed what I imagined them to be. This gives me hope that perhaps, one day, I will be able to communicate directly with loved ones on the other side of the veil. I’ve also learned that the key to everything spiritual lies in meditation, something I strive to do every day if possible. Since beginning that practice, I’ve had two out-of-body experiences (extremely cool!), and have witnessed spiritual activity in my home that cannot be explained any other way.

Being that I write romantic comedies, most people might not expect spirituality to enter into my work, but it has. In fact, it’s very difficult to bar it, since it has become such an integral part of who I am. In Wedlocked, you’ll find a scene where a ghost helps bring a couple together (based on a true story from my life). In my new book, due out April 25th, you’ll meet a cat who seems to possess the power to heal. Remind you of anyone? I’m about to begin work on my third novel, which will deal with near-death experiences, which, of late, have become my greatest focus. The experiences of people who have died and been brought back to life are quite astonishing, and open the door to the miracle of what comes “after”. Luckily, evidence seems to suggest a lot more than clouds and harps!

The paths we lead in life are truly remarkable when you stand back to observe them. I joined the lovely folks at Loveahappyending.com to help promote myself as a romantic comedy author and relationship columnist. To my astonishment, I found so many of my colleagues here, too, possess their own great interest, love, and fascination with the metaphysical world and often share their own stories in books, blogs and comments.  Coincidence? I doubt it. After all, there are no accidents.

Thank you so much, Bonnie, for this amazing feature.  I loved hearing about how the spiritual experiences do feature in your work… and I look forward to finding out more in your next book.  A cat with healing powers?  Bring it on!!

About Bonnie Trachtenberg

Bonnie Trachtenberg is the award-winning, bestselling author of Wedlocked: A Novel. She writes a monthly relationship and advice column for loveahappyending.com. Bonnie was senior writer and copy chief at Book-of-the-Month Club and has written seven children’s book adaptations. She has also written for three newspapers and penned countless magazine articles. Her second novel will be released in April.

You can learn more about Bonnie on her blog and you can also read her relationship column at loveahappyending.com.  Bonnie is on Facebook and Twitter.
About Wedlocked

In this laugh-out-loud romantic comedy inspired by true events, Rebecca Ross, a thirty-six-year-old struggling actress, lets years of disappointment and heartache catapult her into a disastrous marriage to a charismatic man with more than a few surprises up his sleeve. Travel along on their hilarious honeymoon from hell in Italy, which soon has Rebecca longing for her miserable days of singlehood. An entertaining and poignant story about second chances, finding love, and most importantly, finding yourself.

Wedlocked is available on Amazon Kindle and from Barnes & Noble.

All images courtesy of Bonnie Trachtenberg: Thanks, Bonnie!

Nicky visits Dizzy C’s Little Book Blog to talk about Part 2 in the Rock Star Romance Trilogy

Happy Wednesday!  Just a quick message to let you know that I am visiting the lovely Carol on her book blog today to talk about the sequel to Sophie’s Turn  as part of the “W.I.P. Wednesday” series.  Pop on over and visit HERE to get the scoop…

Manuscript is resting, but Nicky Wells (author) is busy!

Good afternoon!  I just thought that perhaps I owed it to you all to let you know what I’ve been up to… having been a little quiet lately.  As you may have read in a previous post, I have finished the first draft for the sequel to “Sophie’s Turn.”  Now, I’m in the ‘manuscript resting’ phase.  This means that the pile of paper pictured below is currently busily being ignored while my mind takes a break from the plot and the characters.  In this manner, when I return to the manuscript for editing in a couple of weeks’ time, I’ll have a fresh outlook on it and I will find it much easier to spot holes, inconsistencies, fine-tune the humour, dial out the comedy moments and generally do everything else that authors do to make a good book truly great.

In the meantime, I thought I might get some rest, too.  Not so!  Here’s what I’ve been up to:

**Thinking about marketing and promotion

**Dreaming up the cover

**Dealing with half-term….

**Travelling to London to visit the US embassy for an ITIN (long story)

**Organising a birthday party for my five year-old

**Blogging, guest blogging, facebooking and tweeting

And somehow, days go by before I can say, “Sophie’s Run.”  And yes… here’s a little snippet of info to whet your appetite.  At this time, I am reasonably confident that the sequel will be titled “Sophie’s Run.”  Why?  Well, watch this space… I’ll be guest blogging at a really hot blog very soon about the sequel!

With that, I shall allow myself one, or maybe two, more weeks of maturing time for the manuscript.  So long my friends, and stay tuned!

Nicky Wells talks about completing the first draft of Part 2 in the Rock Star Romance Trilogy

Congratulations, Nicky,
you did it!

I certainly did, hooray!  For weeks now, I have been posting word counts and little updates here and there regarding my progress on “The Sequel” for my debut novel, Sophie’s Turn.   It is with huge, enormous and almost indescribable excitement that I can announce that I have completed a first draft.
And yes, I really am totally chuffed about it!  Ecstatic, overwhelmed, and ludicrously proud.  I had the best time writing it and it was wonderful to see Sophie’s life develop and move on.

Tell me more…!

At this time, my second master piece is just over 149,000 words long.  That would translate into something like 400 pages in paperback.  Somebody has already told me that this very exciting:  a real ‘doorstop read’ like we used to enjoy in the ’80s and ’90s.  Personally, I am very partial to a long, fantastic read that really involves you and captivates you, and that’s why I have written another one.  (Weighing in at just over 135,000 words, Sophie’s Turn would be about 380 pages long.)

What about the title?  Why aren’t you telling us the title?

Ah, well, now that is a good question.  I do have a title for the sequel.  In fact, I am currently using the third iteration of a working title!  But I am not convinced that I have found the killer title yet.  This, too, will reveal itself to me… probably in the middle of the night some time soon!  For now, I am not in a particular hurry to pin down the definite title.

Why is that, you want to know?  There’s quite a simple reason.  Sophie’s Turn  was born under a different title, and one that I thought was perfect and adhered to for six years.  It was only on the eve of publication–quite literally–that I suddenly realised that the title was somewhat… obscure!  And thus I fell out of love with it.  So I have learnt my lesson and am leaving the title for my next novel fluid and in the air until the last minute… which is to say, until I am finalising cover design with the help of the lovely Jessie Dalrymple.

Ok, but what is “The Sequel” all about?

This novel is Part 2 in the Rock Star Romance trilogy and it continues the story of Sophie, Dan and Rachel, also introducing a couple of important new characters.

The sequel features high drama, comedy moments and two weddings–but whose, and to whom?  If you’ve read Sophie’s Turn, you’ll naturally expect a certain course of events… but life never goes to plan!

Part 2 begins with Sophie’s long over-due thunderbolt-and-lightning moment.  However, just a few short days later, a disastrous ending to her birthday party sees her moving in with none  other than the delectable Dan Hunter.  On a strictly platonic basis, of course, and for a limited time only.  Nonetheless, her stay at Dan’s house sets in motion a series of events that derails everything she had expected to happen.

Best friend Rachel has a much bigger and more important role to play in this chapter of Sophie’s life; but this is not a part that she particularly enjoys.  It also gets her into a lot of trouble.  And Sophie… well, she reaches the point of no return; she’s  just about had enough, and she draws the consequences.

When will you publish your next novel?

I am aiming to publish Part 2 in July of this year.  Here’s my plan of action.  For the next month or so, I won’t be touching the book at all.  Won’t read it, work on it, or consider it in any detail.  I will, however, be busy working on ‘blurbs’ and synopses, as well as the cover, so that I can bring you more juicy information some time in March.

Throughout March, I will be re-reading my work, editing, tweaking, polishing, improving, deleting scenes, adding new ones, plugging holes, streamlining twists (or making them sharper!)… whatever is necessary.  A small group of ‘test readers’ will offer feedback that I will duly incorporate, as well!

In April, I will once more take a break from the novel but May will see the last serious edits and also several rounds of in-house and external proofing.   So watch this space… some time in June, I hope to post a taster chapter right here on this blog!

Wow, that’s a long drawn-out process!

It certainly is!  A great novel is like a good wine.  It needs a lot of maturing!  🙂

I haven’t read Sophie’s Turn yet.  Can you tell me what your debut novel is all about?

Rock Star Romance Sophie’s Turn is the funny, honest and occasionally bitter-sweet story of one young woman’s entanglement with a rock star.

One fine day in Paris, Sophie Penhalligan suddenly finds herself engaged to her teenage crush and love-of-her-life-from-a-distance, rock singer and star extraordinaire Dan Hunter.  But there is the small matter of her very recent, but very prior, engagement to Tim.  Reliable, honest, trusting Tim, her boyfriend of two years stashed away safely in his mews house in South Kensington while Sophie is drinking rather too much champagne with Dan in Paris.  The novel describes how Sophie gets into this impossible situation and how she turns it around.   Follow Sophie on a roller-coaster of events including an ill-fated trip to Paris with Tim, a night of unfulfilled romance with Dan, Sophie and Tim’s engagement party gate-crashed by Dan, and Sophie’s professional secondment to accompany Dan’s band on their revival tour—at Dan’s special request and very much against her will…

You can download Sophie’s Turn onto your Kindle right here.

Amazing!  Thanks for the update!

My pleasure!  Keep watching this space as I will certainly keep you all posted.  Also, get in touch if you have any questions or thoughts or any kind of reaction at all.  I’d love to hear from you!

XX 🙂

A Fond Farewell and an Excited Hello: Unveiling the New Look for Sophie’s Turn

It is with a tinge of nostalgia that I am saying good-bye to the original cover for my debut novel, Sophie’s Turn.  Designed and lovingly created by my wonderful husband, it was a true piece of cover art.  It received plenty of praise and served me well.  And yet…  as I became more experienced in all manners relating to independent publishing, I was beginning to realise that the cover needed a little more ‘oomph.’  So my wonderful husband and I, we took stock, and we decided to ramp things up a little.  More glitz and glamour was called for.

Enter my great friend and former work colleague, the one-and-only Jessie Dalrymple.  Based in Washington, D.C., Jessie and I go back quite a long way.  We have spent many a long night editing, proofing and (in Jessie’s case) designing books for publication for the company that we were both working for then.

Jessie decided to brave the chaotic editor-cum-artist person that she knows I am and offered to have a stab at jazzing the cover up.  And of course, it didn’t quite stay as simple as that.  In the end, I gave Jessie a creative carte blanche and star-designer that she is, here is what she came back with:

Doesn’t it just take your breath away?  If you’ve already read the book, you will know why this is so perfect.  And if you haven’t… what are you waiting for?  You can get it right here. 🙂

Thank you so very much Jessie!  This is terrific.  Words cannot capture what I feel right now… but the cover couldn’t be better.  Wow!

And here’s the credits:

Cover design: Jessie Dalrymple

Cover image, “a carousel and the eiffel tower lit up at night” by www.unrestrictedstock.com, is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported License.

More About the Lovely Jessie Dalrymple (by Jessie Dalrymple)

Jessie is usually designing conservative covers for the U.S. Social Security Administration, where she’s a web and print production specialist. She is the current webmaster for their Research, Statistics, and Policy Analysis and Retirement Policy sites – creating publications and tools for social security researchers around the world. When she started at the agency three years ago, she redesigned all of their statistical report covers using her own photos of flags and fellow concert attendees.

Jessie and Nicky first met while developing corporate research publications, full of stick people and process flowcharts. But Jessie was able to break out into the exciting world of textbook publishing for a few years. She composed dozens of textbooks and workbooks for all grade levels and across various subjects: maths, history, reading/language arts, music. (Her favorite, by far, was the introductory music book!)

Across her career, Jessie has created advertisements, posters, brochures, newsletters, event programs, invitations, logos, annual reports, training manuals, exhibit booth displays, meeting handouts, onscreen presentations, and books for government agencies, nonprofit associations, corporations, and academia. Now she is evolving into more of a web developer, exploring new technologies and new ways to share information with others.

When Jessie is not hard at work, she is usually playing tennis, cycling, or walking with friends. She’s completed five half-marathons, two triathlons, and several local cycling events. She’s obsessed with genealogy research ever since she found a direct ancestral link to Eleanor of Aquitaine and other fascinating historical people. And, while she doesn’t normally read chick lit, she devoured Sophie’s Turn within 3 days of its initial release on Amazon and is now anxiously awaiting Part 2!”

What can I say?  You rock, Jessie! XX

A big “Thank You” to The Bristol Book Club for hosting my first-ever talk last night!

I had a bit of a premiere last night!  I had been kindly invited by The Bristol Book Club to join a meeting to give a talk about my debut novel, Sophie’s Turn.  The event had been in the pipeline for some time, and it was only earlier this week that I started feeling a little bit nervous about my ‘book club talk debut.’  With the helpful advice from my lovely fellow authors over at loveahappyending.com, I was able to pull together a good programme.  So at 6pm last night, I was ready and prepped for my coming-out talk.

I arrived at the venue–very conveniently a pub down Christmas Steps way, inspired choice!–a little after the group had arrived and was greeted by friendly and interested faces.  A warm reception put me at ease, and I grabbed a chair and launched in.

After a brief introduction of myself, I asked everybody around the table to introduce themselves–the group was just small enough to make that feasible.  As the organiser, Neil Burgess, had suggested, there was an interesting mix of ages, gender, Kindle-owners, paper-back enthusiasts, and romance critics, and we immediately launched into a short discussion of the pros and cons of e-books and e-readers.

The Talk…

I pulled us back on topic with an outline of the plot to set the scene for my two readings.  There were some nodding heads and everybody listened carefully, which was wonderful.  I’d selected two excerpts that I thought would appeal to this mixed group; the first one featured the argument between Sophie and Rachel about Sophie’s engagement to Tim, and the second one introduced Dan picking up Sophie from the office (without warning) a few days after this intense argument between the girls.   The group followed the readings well and I even got a few laughs, which I count as a great result!  And there was animated discussion of the excerpts.  For example, participants reflected on the dialogue in the first excerpt and whether it was cliched or heartfelt.  Two of the ladies present considered the ins and outs of Sophie’s immediate melting reaction to Dan’s appearance:  would that be realistic?  One participant felt that it seemed a little unrealistic for Sophie to crumple so quickly, while the other latched onto the idea of the pre-existing relationship and, of course, Dan’s celebrity status… both of which could realistically conspire to make Sophie ‘melt’ so dramatically.

It was a truly energising experience to hear my work–or short excerpts of it–discussed real-time and face-to-face, and see potential readers engage with my words.

The Crisis…

However, things didn’t go quite a smoothly as planned!  Of course they didn’t!  Having extolled the virtues of the e-book, of course I would encounter technical difficulties.  I deliberately took my laptop, having been advised that not everyone in the group had Kindles or iPads.  And so I took the laptop for two reasons.  One, I wanted to be able to show folks that it is quite pleasant and easy to read an e-book on a laptop, and show how the Kindle features really work.  And two, I figured the backlit screen of the laptop would be easier to read in a pub (which could be quite dark?) than a Kindle.  I was right on the second count, but not on the first.

Imagine my distress when, after about two screens, my Kindle App refused to respond.  No clicking or dragging would move the page on, and I was quite literally stuck mid-sentence.  Bless The Book Club, they were all really supportive but of course couldn’t resist the odd, and well justified, comment that something like this wouldn’t have happened with a paper back.  Very true!  It appears that the laptop was looking for an Internet connection (not available there, sorry!) and that took up some considerable resources, freezing the screen in the process.

Agh.  How embarrassing.  I kept talking while I was trying to figure out where to go.  I felt too flustered to try and turn the wireless feature off, so it kept looking.  Eventually I worked out that a combination of dragging the text forward by about five percent and then clicking back to the right screen offered a workaround, if a clumsy one.  Keeping an eye on the time and considering the technical difficulties, I cut the second reading short and opened the floor for debate.

The Discussion…

One interesting discussion strand that came up right away was whether I considered my book as ‘chick lit.’  I think my enthusiastic response (“absolutely”) surprised some of the members, and the negative publicity that chick lit has had recently was then mentioned.  I gave an edited version of my views on that subject (as previously featured on my blog here) and I think that was well received overall.  I can’t be one hundred per-cent sure, of course, but at least they went away knowing that I am proud of what I do.

Right at the very end, I had some questions about the publishing process, why I published through KDP and whether I’d been on the agent trail.  I answered the questions as openly and honestly as I could. Again, I think some of my responses surprised the folks there–especially regarding an author’s wide span of control over their markets, pricing and cover strategies.

So after a pleasant hour, I closed my talk and handed out my goodies.  I’d prepared the obligatory flyer with blurbs, review highlights and purchase information.  I’d also made a book mark, which caused a round of laughter.  “Bookmarks for a Kindle?”  I joined in with the laughter and handed the bookmarks out anyway, telling the group that after they’d used the bookmarks in their current paperback read for a few weeks, they would finally crumble, give-in, surrender and download a copy of Sophie’s Turn.  🙂

All in all, I think my first book club talk went well.  There was good discussion, helpful comments and… right at the end… a few people came up to me and told me they thought I was doing a brilliant job, and had the right approach to self-promotion.  Needless to say, I was absolutely over the moon to hear that.

Still, there are some lessons learnt for me here.

1) Next time, take the Kindle.  Or at the very least, disable the network connection.

2) Set up the plot more meticulously so that listeners know exactly how the excerpts fit into the story.  I think I was probably a bit too quick in this respect last night…

3) Mark a variety of excerpts so that I can alter the course of readings if feedback indicates that a group might be after something different.

So once more, a big and heart-felt “Thank You” to the lovely members of The Bristol Book Club for listening to my talk, asking great questions, raising fabulous points, and being so patient and supportive of this here newbie author.

If you are interested in joining The Bristol Book Club, find out about their next meet-up here.